The text below is an attempt at the beginning of one of my articles to include in my final project. Update: I didn't use this as the baseline for the final article used in my magazine. I chose to start writing a new piece because I was struggling to get the article to the length I needed, whilst writing something that flowed nicely and read fluently. Despite not using it in the final project, this attempt at writing was my first and it helped me find the elements of an article I liked and wanted to include and, similarly, the aspects I wanted to avoid. For example, I believe my use of 'I' in this piece took attention away from the actual purpose of the magazine and made it seem more like an opinion piece than an informative one, so I avoided this when starting to write my final project. The piece below helped me form ideas of my writing style used in the final project, so wasn't redundant at all.